So we just recently finished our Visual Poem, mine was about time and the title was just "Time" obviously. It was about time like time passing and things similar to that. I, basically the whole thing is like time lapses and text layovers. I wanted to keep it really simple but still "deep" I guess. But basically I have a lot of time lapses because you know; Time Lapses and Time and honestly, I think it resembles everything amazingly and no one realizes time and what it does and whatever I'm rambling.
I didn't really add special effects (even though I was supposed to) Like I said I wanted to keep it simple. But I think not adding them was really good on the mood and the whole overall meaning of my poem.
Um, I don't really have results on how I did from other people, but hopefully I get good ones. And I think I've could've did a little better by maybe like getting more variety of B-Roll and having more text layovers.
I didn't really add special effects (even though I was supposed to) Like I said I wanted to keep it simple. But I think not adding them was really good on the mood and the whole overall meaning of my poem.
Um, I don't really have results on how I did from other people, but hopefully I get good ones. And I think I've could've did a little better by maybe like getting more variety of B-Roll and having more text layovers.
good lyrics
ReplyDeletetoo much camera movement
good visuals
good b roll
ReplyDeleteto much movement
good peom
I like the amount of timelapses you have
ReplyDeletethe backround noise
The text coming out of your footsteps
You had great time lapses it really added to the whole "Time" Subject of your story.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you should have gotten a little more b-roll you used a repeating shot.
Other than that you had great audio and visuals.
Really nice time lapses.
ReplyDeleteI think that you should slow down the words.
I really liked your poem and the words you used.
like the visuals
ReplyDeleteneed some music
nice job
good timelaps.
ReplyDeleteNothing was wrong
Good audio.
I really like both of your time lapse.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing tat could be better is to read a little faster.
I also like how clear you read.
liked the meaning
ReplyDeletemore effects
it said both sides
goood shots, more tansistions, good b-roll
ReplyDeleteI liked the visuals.
ReplyDeleteI think that your visuals could have been more related to what you were saying.
I really liked the poem itself.
Good lyrics
ReplyDeletelots of movement
nice time apse
Really beautiful time lapses! I think you should slow the text down but you had great use of it!
ReplyDeleteGood audio
ReplyDeleteThere was camera movement
Visuals fit the poem
I really liked the time-lapse of the sunset and the palm trees, breath taking view.
ReplyDeleteI didn't see much transitions.
Great poem!
Great poem. Could have slow down the words. Great visuals
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